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Wednesday, 10 June 2020

Narrative writing

I could hear a snickering from behind, I saw Liam almost crying of laughter along with Cameron and Callie wheezing and gasping for air. I couldn't help but laugh myself. A wave of absolute hysteria drowned the entire room, even the strange people on my living room floor had to break into an awkward smile.

In room one we have been writing our own narratives, this is a snippet of a work in progress.
Please leave a comment to help me improve my work! 
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 June 2020 at 10:22

    Kia ora, Chelo. I am Lily-Rose from New Brighton Catholic School. I really like your post about some of your narrative. It sounds like a good narrative. I like how you used really long words to describe things. Can you put the whole narrative in another blog post?

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  2. Miss Holland12 June 2020 at 18:47

    Hi Chelo,

    I absolutely love your snippet from your narrative. You have added so much detail which gives the reader a clear image in their head.


    Have you got a title for this narrative?

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