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Tuesday 16 June 2020

Narrative snippet

I had been studying the writing throughout the journal for so long by the time I looked at the analogue clock on my bedside table it said 3:42am in red lights illuminating the pages of the small book. Quickly I wrote in my diary like I do everyday. I signed it at the bottom and I closed my eyes reading in bad lighting for so long made them sting as I shut them...

Hello! This is another part of my narrative writing. I currently just over 11 pages and am still editing and adding new things to it, I will post more snippets to my blog every now and again if you like it!
Have a good day!
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:40

    Hi Chelo! I love your writing and how it has so many interesting word and the way it has been written. Keep it up!

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  2. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:41

    Hi Chelo,
    I love the snippet of your writing!
    I am exited to see full story.

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  3. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:46

    sup my dude AMAZING STORY this is soooooo goood
    i love the creativity and detil you put in this peice =w=

    love-your best friend/TRin

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    1. Anonymous18 June 2020 at 13:55

      Thanks Trin I'm glad you like it!

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  4. Anonymous22 June 2020 at 13:33

    Hey Chelo,
    I love this snippet of writing, your stories always impress me. Keep up the great work and your story is so long wow it must of taken you a while to write it!

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