Narrative snippet

I had been studying the writing throughout the journal for so long by the time I looked at the analogue clock on my bedside table it said 3:42am in red lights illuminating the pages of the small book. Quickly I wrote in my diary like I do everyday. I signed it at the bottom and I closed my eyes reading in bad lighting for so long made them sting as I shut them...

Hello! This is another part of my narrative writing. I currently just over 11 pages and am still editing and adding new things to it, I will post more snippets to my blog every now and again if you like it!

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Reliability

This week we are looking at Reliability and what it means.

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Narrative writing

I could hear a snickering from behind, I saw Liam almost crying of laughter along with Cameron and Callie wheezing and gasping for air. I couldn't help but laugh myself. A wave of absolute hysteria drowned the entire room, even the strange people on my living room floor had to break into an awkward smile.

In room one we have been writing our own narratives, this is a snippet of a work in progress.

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Virtues

Virtues

Accepting
I feel like I am accepting towards all people,
I try to show to other people that I don't judge people based on appearance or background. I try to show others that if I find them kind and respectful I can make that decision on what I see in the person

In room 1 we have been looking at virtues that we think we are strong in and understand how to grow in the virtues of God. This is a work in progress, please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment to help me improve my work!

Mary

Mary is typically drawn in a white and blue outfit because…

Blue was specifically difficult to make, if you had any blue dye or blue clothing you would be seen as a wealthy and or rich person. So they would do this in order to show that she was rich in love and kindness.

Mary grew up in a town in Nazareth, Galilee, with her mother Anne and her father Joachim.

When one day an angel appeared in front of Mary. He told her that God had chosen her to be the mother of his son, the one that will save all humanity and relieve us from sin. Mary accepted his offer and quickly went home to tell her husband about what had happened.

When Jesus was born Mary would care for and try to protect her son, she did this very well but she could not save him from everything.

When Jesus was condemned to death and nailed to the cross, Mary accepted that it was part of what God had said that he would do to relieve us from any sinful behaviour, so she stood by Jesus even during his lowest points.

Because of the never ending love that Mary had for Jesus he allowed her to ascend into heaven body and soul.

And allowed us to see her as our own mother as well.

Because of her love and acceptance she was blessed and blessed us as well.

In room 1 we've been looking at Mary and how she played one of the biggest roles in Jesus' life and our's.

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Differences and similarity's

For writing in room 1 we have been looking at analysing characters We are learning to analyse characters, events and actions in multimedia. This is a screenshot of what I have done, we needed to look at the differences and similarity's between the characters from an animated short film called 'The small shoemaker'. Please leave a Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful comment to help me improve my work!

The ascension of Jesus

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Currently in room one we have been learning about the ascension of Jesus.

I have made a comic strip showing the events.

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