WALT: Write a recount

Personal Goal: Use metaphors, illerations, similes, 

Ideas
Holiday
What you did in the weekend
non-fiction/ fiction
What you have done at NBC


Things to remember
Structure: title, orientation, sequence of events, concluding statement
Punctuation & paragraphs
Describe characters & places
Use metaphors, illerations, similes,


On Saturday the 19th of October, my mother, my father, my brother and I all went to a small gallery with my brothers girlfriend Meg to see a beautiful piece of art that Don (megs dad) had made out of a gorgeous light brown timber. It was a 3D mandala like wall-hanging to raise money for Kileys cancer medication.

Kiley is a mother of two Oli a 14 year old and Meg a 20 year old. Kiley was diagnosed with stage 4 incurable breast cancer in September 2017, her cancer has recently spread to her kidneys, lungs and liver. Don and Kiley divorced, and since, Kiley has gotten married to a man named Johnny they can not afford the medication that Kiley needs. (Her medication is $7,000 a month $84,000 a year.)

So Don has kindly made this art piece to raise money for her medication the bidding price started $2,500,
There was also a go fund me page made for Kiley within the first hour she had raised $2,700+ and continued to grow, this brought what felt like a huge wave of smiles to Kileys friends & family. It was as beautiful as a fresh bouquet of flowers, the gallery was made up of extremely supportive new Zealand artists, I am so glad that I was able to attend this art bidding.

By Chelo

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Click here to see part one make sure you read the first one   

by Chelo and Kade

Random story pt 2

Tabitha's point of veiw.

It was a warm spring afternoon I took a deep breath in and made a decision.

I'M DOING IT. was strapped in I took a leap of faith.

No going back now…

I was falling the enemy was in sights

Oh how rude of me I never told you my name.

Hi im TABITHA!!!

I was skydiving trying to save Mr Bob my best friend.

He may be my best friend but we are so different you see…

For fun I would I dont know jump out of a plane but he would go out for dinner with his wife to a nearby McDonald's to watch the MC MATES!!!!!!

BACK TO THE STORY!

I

Falling… the wind was in my hair.

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH I could hear Mr Bob screaming for help…

I shot the giant hot dog with a tranquilliser dart he let Mr bobs family free now 

 I watched as mr bob sped away a puff of smoke spluttered out of the engin.

¨There he goes just like the good old days back at school I miss those days...there was a lot less drama. Hahahahaha¨

I jumped into my Tesla everything was going to plan.

Until…

HE WAS SPEEDING TOWARDS AN UNFINISHED BRIDGE!

(Oooohhhhh spooky)

Beneath the road a 400 foot drop and a lot of rocks.no way could he survive falling off that.

I sped  to save him…

N-no NNNNNNOOOOOOOOO MR BOB 

This week our virtue is Sacred, to represent this virtue I have made a google drawing  of a dove and a candle because they are sacred items.

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This is my blog post about the rosary that I have done with Gabrielle.

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